Occupational Intakes of Radionuclides Part 4


Draft document: Occupational Intakes of Radionuclides Part 4
Submitted by Sergei Tolmachev, US Transuranium and Uranium Registries
Commenting on behalf of the organisation

Line 5416: ''donor 269'' needs to be ''Case 0269''

Line 5433: ''donor 269'' needs to be ''Case 0269''

Line 7335: ''Trans-Uranium'' - needs to be  ''Transuranium''  and ''donor 269'' - ''Case 0269''

Line 7400: "USTUR donor 0269" needs to be "USTUR Case 0269"

Line 9046: ''Trans-Uranium'' and Uranium Registries (USTUR) donor 269 -  "Transuranium'' and ''donor 269''  needs to be ''Case 0269''

Line 9058: ''donor 269'' - ''USTUR Case 0269''

Line 9068: ''USTUR donors (631 and 745)'' change to ''USTUR Registrants (cases 0631 and 0745)''

Line 9072: ''donor 269'' change to ''USTUR Case 0269''

Line 9494: USTUR Case 269 change to  USTUR Case 0269

Line 9097: USTUR Case 269 change to  USTUR Case 0269

Line 9790: no Nielcen C.E. as a co-author. Correct reference is" Puncher M, Birchall A, Tolmachev SY. The Mayak Worker Dosimetry System (MWDS 2013): A re-analysis of USTUR case 0269 to determine whether plutonium binds to the lungs. Radiat Prot Dosimetry: Epub ahead of print; 2016"

Line 10004: not ''distribution'' - ''retention'' in the title. correct  reference is  Tolmachev, S. Y., Nielsen, C. E., Avtandilashvili, M., Puncher, M., Martinez, F., Thomas, E. M., Miller, F. L., Morgan, W. F. and Birchall, A. The Mayak Worker Dosimetry System (MWDS 2013): Soluble plutonium retention in the lungs of an occupationally exposed USTUR case. Radiat Prot Dosimetry, Epub ahead of print; 2016.

Line 10696: "Transuranium and Uranium Registry (USTUR)" - please correct to United States Transuranium and Uraniun Registries (USTUR). It is "Regsitries" not "Registry"

Line 10712: ''USTUR Case 102" - should be ''USTUR Case 0102''. USTUR has 4-digit case numbers

Line 10741: same as Line 10712, USTUR Case 0102

Line 11075: superscript for  238Pu is missing


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